Post by John McBain on Mar 4, 2012 3:59:25 GMT -5
I have wrotten 34 episodes so far from this soap and I will now show the First One, tell me if you like em
One Way to the future: Episode 1
Scene 1: Whitney came home from an exhausting day at work, She couldn’t stop thinking about that John and her are not together anymore, Whitney wanted to stop thinking about it, Whitney said to herself ‘’Let’s just take a warm bath and take it easy tonight’’, Whitney took her Jacket off and her shoes and then walked towards the bathroom to take a bath but on her way she saw John sitting on a chair by the Dining room table, Whitney asked ‘’What are you doing here?’’
Scene 2: Jennifer was just barely done with her Diving Lessons, And Josh came to pick her up, Jennifer stepped into the car and Josh asked right away ‘’How did it go?’’, Jennifer replied back saying ‘’It didn’t go good at all, That stupid bitch Jenna almost got me expelled!’’
Scene 3: Angie was laying in her bed reading a book to her 2 little kids (Gage and Austin) Gage was 4 Years old and Austin was 6 Years old, And then Angie heard the phone ring, She wanted to answer but Gage started Begging by saying ‘’No Mommy I want to hear the rest of the story’’ and Austin said ‘’Me to!’’ Angie let the phone ringing and kept on reading but little did she know that that phone call was going to be the shock of her life.
Scene 4: Whitney Asked ‘’What are you doing here?’’, John said ‘’Aren’t you happy to see me?’’ Whitney looked confused and said ‘’Okay John I see you are drunk please leave my house right now!’’ John Said ‘’I am not drunk!!’’ Whitney came over to him and tried to pull him up but he was to heavy and Whitney said ‘’If you don’t get out of my house right now I am going to call the Police!’’
Scene 5: Jennifer said ‘’It didn’t go good at all, That stupid bitch Jenna almost got me Expelled!’’ Josh looked shocked and asked ‘’How?’’ And Jennifer replied back ‘’She went to say something to our coach what wasn’t true.’’ Josh asked ‘’What did she say?’’ Jennifer said back ‘’She went to the coach and said that I was gossiping about her and doing bad stuff to her, While I hardly even spoke to her, So she is just saying a lot of Bull shit and it really pisses me off that she would make up those kind of stuff’’ Josh said back ‘’Well can’t you say to the coach that she is making it up?’’ Jennifer said ‘’Yeah I could, but who knows What she will do back to me.’’ Josh said ‘’Don’t worry about what other people think about you, No wonder she is messing with you cause she will probably think ‘’Oh she won’t tell anything anyways’’ You don’t want that do you?’’ Jennifer said ‘’No of course I don’t want that’’ Josh said ‘’If you don’t feel safe there any more than just quit it, I know it’s your dream but you are only making your life miserable by staying on this sport, Just don something else that doesn’t have Jenna there’’ Jennifer said ‘’But if Jenna finds me again…..’’ Jennifer couldn’t even finish her sentence and Josh said ‘’See look this is what I mean you can’t stop thinking about what other people think of you just chill there for a minute, And I will have a talk with your trainer to say that it’s not okay that Jenna is doing that’’ Jennifer said ‘’No I am 24 Years old I can say it to him myself’’ Josh said ‘’There that is the kind of attitude I want now also stick up for yourself when Jenna is annoying you?’’ Jennifer said ‘’That is easier said than done!’’
Scene 6: Angie's Dad (George) was in the Hospital and the phone call was from the doctor, But Angie didn’t answer the phone, So a Half hour later when Angie was already done reading the story to Gage and Austin she was laying in her bed reading her own book, But then she heard the Phone ring again, And it was the doctor (Sam) saying ''Is this Angie?'' Angie said ''Yes I am'' And Sam asked ''Why didn’t you answer the phone when I last called?'', Angie answered back saying ''I was reading a book to my 2 Little kids'' Sam said ''But, You should have answered!'' Angie asked ''Why is it so important?'' Sam answered back saying ''I Have really bad news about your dad.'' Angie asked ''What happened to him?''
One Way to the future: Episode 1
Scene 1: Whitney came home from an exhausting day at work, She couldn’t stop thinking about that John and her are not together anymore, Whitney wanted to stop thinking about it, Whitney said to herself ‘’Let’s just take a warm bath and take it easy tonight’’, Whitney took her Jacket off and her shoes and then walked towards the bathroom to take a bath but on her way she saw John sitting on a chair by the Dining room table, Whitney asked ‘’What are you doing here?’’
Scene 2: Jennifer was just barely done with her Diving Lessons, And Josh came to pick her up, Jennifer stepped into the car and Josh asked right away ‘’How did it go?’’, Jennifer replied back saying ‘’It didn’t go good at all, That stupid bitch Jenna almost got me expelled!’’
Scene 3: Angie was laying in her bed reading a book to her 2 little kids (Gage and Austin) Gage was 4 Years old and Austin was 6 Years old, And then Angie heard the phone ring, She wanted to answer but Gage started Begging by saying ‘’No Mommy I want to hear the rest of the story’’ and Austin said ‘’Me to!’’ Angie let the phone ringing and kept on reading but little did she know that that phone call was going to be the shock of her life.
Scene 4: Whitney Asked ‘’What are you doing here?’’, John said ‘’Aren’t you happy to see me?’’ Whitney looked confused and said ‘’Okay John I see you are drunk please leave my house right now!’’ John Said ‘’I am not drunk!!’’ Whitney came over to him and tried to pull him up but he was to heavy and Whitney said ‘’If you don’t get out of my house right now I am going to call the Police!’’
Scene 5: Jennifer said ‘’It didn’t go good at all, That stupid bitch Jenna almost got me Expelled!’’ Josh looked shocked and asked ‘’How?’’ And Jennifer replied back ‘’She went to say something to our coach what wasn’t true.’’ Josh asked ‘’What did she say?’’ Jennifer said back ‘’She went to the coach and said that I was gossiping about her and doing bad stuff to her, While I hardly even spoke to her, So she is just saying a lot of Bull shit and it really pisses me off that she would make up those kind of stuff’’ Josh said back ‘’Well can’t you say to the coach that she is making it up?’’ Jennifer said ‘’Yeah I could, but who knows What she will do back to me.’’ Josh said ‘’Don’t worry about what other people think about you, No wonder she is messing with you cause she will probably think ‘’Oh she won’t tell anything anyways’’ You don’t want that do you?’’ Jennifer said ‘’No of course I don’t want that’’ Josh said ‘’If you don’t feel safe there any more than just quit it, I know it’s your dream but you are only making your life miserable by staying on this sport, Just don something else that doesn’t have Jenna there’’ Jennifer said ‘’But if Jenna finds me again…..’’ Jennifer couldn’t even finish her sentence and Josh said ‘’See look this is what I mean you can’t stop thinking about what other people think of you just chill there for a minute, And I will have a talk with your trainer to say that it’s not okay that Jenna is doing that’’ Jennifer said ‘’No I am 24 Years old I can say it to him myself’’ Josh said ‘’There that is the kind of attitude I want now also stick up for yourself when Jenna is annoying you?’’ Jennifer said ‘’That is easier said than done!’’
Scene 6: Angie's Dad (George) was in the Hospital and the phone call was from the doctor, But Angie didn’t answer the phone, So a Half hour later when Angie was already done reading the story to Gage and Austin she was laying in her bed reading her own book, But then she heard the Phone ring again, And it was the doctor (Sam) saying ''Is this Angie?'' Angie said ''Yes I am'' And Sam asked ''Why didn’t you answer the phone when I last called?'', Angie answered back saying ''I was reading a book to my 2 Little kids'' Sam said ''But, You should have answered!'' Angie asked ''Why is it so important?'' Sam answered back saying ''I Have really bad news about your dad.'' Angie asked ''What happened to him?''